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Para ♦ Suspense ♦ Dystopian ♦ New Adult ♦ Contemporary ♦ Erotica ♦ What's the connection?....... Romance of course!
Leather, Lace and Rock-n-Roll - Mia Dymond For a free book yes indeed this was fun. It was sassy and had a fair amount of humour but it also had a lot of grammar errors, words missing and typos. I didn't realise it was going to be about Navy Seals (yeah I get why it says SEALS #1 in brackets now) and I have to say I am not into that at all, words like perps and intel, affirmative kinda pee me off so that didn't help my enjoyment. But I do like a rock stories so that part held my attention and kept me reading on. Little got left to the imagination, there were no surprises and it was totally predictable but let's give another high note, yes it is a good fun read but please somebody proof read this and make it better, it really could be so much more than just mediocre.