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Para ♦ Suspense ♦ Dystopian ♦ New Adult ♦ Contemporary ♦ Erotica ♦ What's the connection?....... Romance of course!
Embracing Him - C. Shell Still sticking with two stars, the potential is there for these to be really good, using a little of her own imagination the author could let these books rock but they are being held back in my opinion because they are not fresh and full of new ideas, they still smack of other authors alpha males, ideas and traits.

But the more I read of this author the more I am truly gobsmacked at the amount of typos and grammatical errors. Even the body guard changes his name in this book because it's been mistyped and not just once a few times! That's just bad, lack of editing and not thoughtful to the reader. Sentences have whole words missing too and words spelled wrong numerous times.

My advice, get some beta readers or get an editor, then get fresh ideas that are from truly your own head and the writing may/should bloom and be captivating.